Sunday, November 06, 2011
Boardwalk Empire No. 19: Peg of Old

By Edward Copeland
Forgive me, Charles Dickens: It was the best of Boardwalk Empire, it was the worst of Boardwalk Empire. That's something for me to write, since it's rare to see the worst. Toward the beginning of tonight's episode, a development occurs that shows real signs of promise, not only in terms of storytelling intrigue but in finally — seven episodes into the second season of Boardwalk Empire — finding a way to reintegrate Agent Van Alden closer to the main plot lines and, more importantly, giving us the first chance in a very long time to see Steve Buscemi and Michael Shannon act in a scene together. There also are, as always, some stellar scenes. Unfortunately, these constitute a very small portion of the most disjointed episode of the second season. When I review movies, a general rule of thumb is that the more writers receive credit for a screenplay, the more likely it is that the movie will end up being a mess. I imagine the same holds true for teleplays. Usually many on a show's writing staff contribute to every episode, but, for the most part, only one writer, occasionally two, get the "written by" credit (Don't pay attention to what it says on IMDb, especially if it has staff writer italicized after their name — go by what's on the screen). "Peg of Old" lists Howard Korder & Steve Kornacki & Bathsheba Doran as the writers of this episode and while I looked through HBO GO at past episodes that co-executive producer Korder, co-producer and story editor Kornacki and new staff writer Doran wrote, I found no instance where any of the three wrote an episode with a partner. I can't be 100% certain that's why "Peg of Old" ends up feeling as if it were sewn together from various parts, but no other installment this season felt so piecemeal to me. I don't think you can blame the director: He had to make do with what he was given and Allen Coulter has proved how great he can be in the past when he helmed last season's "Paris Green," many classic episodes of The Sopranos including "College," "The Knight in White Satin Armor" and "Irregular Around the Margins" as well as the underrated feature film Hollywoodland. Coulter also does try to make the visuals as interesting as possible even when the content sags. An interesting coincidence about "Peg of Old" stems from its status as the season's seventh episode. In the first season, the episode I disliked the most (even calling it disjointed) also happened to be the seventh episode, "Home," which, despite its flaws, introduced the marvelous Richard Harrow character. Maybe seven isn't such a lucky number, at least as far as Boardwalk Empire goes. Poor Allen Coulter directed that episode as well. It's a shame about tonight, because when "Peg of Old" gets going with a run of several consecutive scenes where Boardwalk Empire comes off as its usual, riveting self, you get hopeful that perhaps just the beginning was off. Unfortunately, it goes off track again with scenes that feel repetitive, unnecessary or of little interest. I've included more criticism in this recap than any other this season. Those comments appear in italics.
As the episode opens, it appears that Nucky has been granted the wish he asked for at Mayor Bader's birthday party — Jack Dempsey has been prepping for his upcoming fight against Georges Carpentier to be held July 2 in Jersey City on the beaches of Atlantic City. You'd think he were in a real match as bloody as he makes his sparring partner until the bell rings giving the other guy a break — and the press a chance to hit the champ with some questions. "What do you say to those who say you dodged the draft?" one reporter (David Konig) asks. "I don't say nothin' because nobody ever says that to my face," Dempsey responds. Another reporter (Tony Rossi) reminds Dempsey that Carpentier "is a war hero after all." Dempsey tells the newspaperman that after the fight the other boxer "will wish he had a foxhole to crawl into." The first reporter asks about Carpentier's "secret punch." "What about his secret punch? We hear he has a secret punch?" the member of the Fourth Estate repeats to the heavyweight champ. "That's a lot of hooey. Besides, I've got tricks of my own," Dempsey

Van Alden returns to the apartment to find records playing and Lucy smoking. He asks where the baby is. Lucy tells him that she finally fell asleep after crying for five hours straight. "Did you feed her?" Nelson questions accusingly. "Of course I did. What do you think I am?" she replies. "I apologize. I have a headache," he responds as he hangs up his hat. Lucy stands and inquires about what Rose has said. "She's gone to visit an aunt in Milwaukee — according to the neighbors," he informs her. "Got a number for this aunt? An address?" Lucy wants to know. "She will not speak to me on the telephone. She will not answer my letters. We're being tested, Rose and I," Nelson declares. "And what about me?" Lucy asks. "I'm sure you're being tested as well in your fashion," he replies. A bit of the old Lucy starts to resurface, some anger growing as she approaches the agent. "I'm talking about our arrangement, Nelson. You owe me money," she tells him. "Yes. I'm sorry. I don't have it," he admits. "You don't have it now or you don't have it at all," Lucy glares as the baby girl can be heard starting to awaken. "You're enjoying the phonograph, aren't you?" Van Alden asks in an attempt to change the subject. Lucy shuts off the music as the baby's crying grows louder as does her voice. "When will you get it?" she demands to know. Nelson looks down the hall and tries to divert Lucy's attention to the child. "I need an answer!" Lucy shouts. "The child — it's an extremely penetrating sound," he says. "Three thousand dollars," Lucy reminds him. "That's a large sum," Nelson admits. "It is to me," Lucy agrees. "Lord knows what I was thinking," he responds, repeatedly looking back toward the wailing infant. "You were conning me?" Lucy accuses. Van Alden shakes his head no before he grabs his hat. "Frankly, it's impossible to concentrate in these conditions," he declares. "We had an agreement," Lucy yells at him as he exits the apartment. "You owe me money! This is your baby, you bought it! She doesn't even have a name!" A male neighbor shouts at her to quiet the baby. "You shut her!" Lucy screams back.
"We gonna start this thing?" Capone asks Jimmy who has gathered the up-and-coming gangsters in the Commodore's great living room. Why should Al Capone be there? As I said early in the season, it would be a lot harder to keep Capone reasonably involved in the ongoing storylines than the New York gangsters such as Rothstein, Luciano and Lansky. I believe I've been proven right since, as great as Stephen Graham is as Capone, this marks only his third appearance this season and we're up to the seventh episode. Characters who don't appear in the opening credits have appeared more often and played more significant roles. More tragically, this scene illustrates


If Agent Nelson Van Alden ever had enough imagination to write his memoirs, he certainly would be able to tell how his time in Atlantic City became more surprising the longer he worked there and as he approached his makeshift office housed within the city's Post Office, he was about to encounter another one. Strangers appear to have overtaken the place, including a woman (Julianne Nicholson) who sits at his desk talking on the phone. "What in damnation is going on here? Where is Agent Sawicki?" Van Alden demands to know. While the new people stare at the booming presence, Sawicki's head pops up behind a piece of furniture in the back. Van Alden stomps his way to him. "Who is this woman at my desk?" he asks Sawicki, "She's on the phone — with the attorney general," Sawicki whispers. Van Alden walks

Margaret steps out of a car in Brooklyn in the fifth scene and fifth separate story strand of this episode. No wonder I started getting that disjointed feeling in this episode. Unlike most episodes, "Peg of Old" seems to lack a unifying theme and though I'm a fan of big casts, the ensemble threatens to overwhelm the series as it keeps adding characters to the canvas as it's about to when we meet Margaret's long-lost siblings. Dressed in some of her finest clothes, Margaret looks out of a place as she walks through the working-class streets of

Ginsburg informs Nucky what he knows about Esther Randolph. Finally a scene that relates to another scene in this episode Randolph turns out to have been a public defender who spent 10 years representing draft dodgers and prostitutes. "And she works for Harry Daugherty?" Nucky says with surprise. "She caught the governor's eye in California, joined the U.S. attorney's office. I don't think Daugherty can get rid of her," Ginsburg proclaims. "Why the fuck not?" Nucky asks. "Someone has to look honest," Ginsburg replies. Thompson starts getting peeved about the federal court ploy not working. Ginsburg says he's been waiting to hear this. "If the attorney general can't help you, how can I?" Ginsburg states in his own defense. "I'm not the only one in town with something to lose," Nucky declares. "But you are the one they're coming after," Ginsburg reminds him. "The Commodore's in a diaper, O'Neill's off hiding, At least they've noticed he's missing Neary, Boyd, Paddy Ryan — if you can't work something on them, what the fuck am I paying you for?" Nucky

Van Alden watches with interest as Ward Boss Neary gives a deposition to Esther Randolph, an additional one from one he had already given for the state case since it's now federal. Unfortunately for Nelson, they close the door before he can eavesdrop on any juicy details that Neary might be giving up on Nucky. "And your sworn testimony will be used as a basis for prosecuting Mr. Thompson," Randolph asks Neary who nods yes. "The Dictaphone can't hear you nod," she whispers to him. "I mean yes," Neary says. Words come in and out for both Van Alden and the viewer. "Mr. Neary, you were arrested last March for storage of illegal alcohol with intent to sell," Randolph tells him. "I paid my debt on that," Neary proclaims. We can hear Randolph mention a $500 fine when Van Alden's phone rings. He quickly grabs it. "Special Agent Van Alden," he answers. Back in the deposition room, we don't know what happened but Neary seems upset. "I had a deal with the other prosecutor," Neary insists. "That deal is null and void. I can make your life quite difficult, Mr. Neary. In fact, I might enjoy it," Randolph informs him. Seems this transfer to federal court could be bad for everybody. O'Neill may have gotten off easy with just a wrench to the throat and head. "I understand. Right away," Nelson tells the person on the other end of the phone. "A situation has arisen. I will return as soon as possible," Van Alden informs Sawicki as he hightails it out of the office.
The reunited Rohan siblings share such a quiet meal that each time a fork or knife touches a plate, it sounds as if someone might be playing the drums. The only other noise comes from the street through the open window. Eventually, little Aylesh/Juliet breaks the verbal silence. "Did you take a boat here, miss?" she asks Margaret. "She's not of 'miss' age," Beth corrects her little sister. "She's like Peg of old, Juliet," Nuala adds. "I took the train," Margaret answers. "You can't take the train from Ireland," Juliet declares. "I live in Atlantic City,"

The ever-twisted mother-son relationship between Gillian and Jimmy continues as Gillian insists Jimmy close his eyes while she's changing. "When did you start getting modest?" Jimmy asks. "It isn't a flattering light. Men don't have to worry about these things," she explains. After Gillian has put on her dress, she asks her son for his opinion. He asks if she's meeting someone. "Just some girls from the Beaux Arts. They'll clock every wrinkle," Gillian claims. "You don't get old, Ma," he says. Gillian asks Jimmy if he remembers summers on the beach and he responds that everyone thought he was her brother. "Do you know what happens tomorrow?" Jimmy inquires of his mother. She dismisses its importance and walks to the other side of the room. "It is to me. A man's gonna get off a train, he's gonna walk up to Nucky Thompson and he's gonna put a bullet in him — right here," Jimmy points his fingers to his forehead, " — just because I said so. What do you think about that?" Gillian takes a drink. "I think the world's going to find out what kind of man it's dealing with," she replies. "And if I call it off?" he speculates. "Your friends wouldn't like that," she comments as she takes another drink. "They don't care what happens to Nucky," Jimmy tells her. "No, but they are watching you — very closely. They're delightful boys, dear. Colorful and ambitious. I'd never make the mistake of letting them see you be indecisive," Gillian counsels. "And that's why he dies? This isn't what we talked about, Ma," Jimmy says. "Well, we weren't being honest then. Now we are," Gillian tells him. "I don't want to do this," Jimmy declares sadly. "It's already done. It was done when you gave the order. The rest is just bookkeeping — and you can't bother with that. Make me proud of you," his mother whispers those last words in his ear.

What we've been waiting for has arrived. Nucky drinks while Lucy still sits in his office and Eddie opens the door to allow Nelson to storm in. Forget the promotion for Dempsey vs. Carpentier, we have a new round of Thompson vs. Van Alden that viewers have been denied since last season. "Lucy, would you be so kind as to give Agent Van Alden and myself a moment alone?" Nucky asks. Lucy picks up the bassinet with the baby girl. "I didn't know where else — " Lucy doesn't get to finish as Nelson says, "We'll discuss this at home — dear." The insincerity with which Van Alden via Michael Shannon tosses that "dear" in at the end plays note perfectly — giving the viewer a laugh without betraying the character's integrity by revealing it as something added for a humorous effect. Nucky holds up a decanter of booze to Van Alden. "If there was ever a time," Nucky offers. "No thank you," Nelson declines. "Fair enough," Nucky says as he pours himself one. "First and foremost, here's to you. It is, after all, a blessed event in the life of any man," Thompson congratulates the agent, barely containing his glee. I'm often surprised when I read people who still question whether casting Steve Buscemi as Nucky has proved to be a good idea, but how can anyone watch his work in a scene such as this and ask that? Nucky has so many facets to him and I've yet to see Buscemi flub any of them. He nails every emotional state — and Nucky goes through most of them — and shows equal flair in scenes comic and dramatic. "What do you want?" Van Alden scowls. "This might be a good time to charm me," Nucky suggests. "Why? Does that make blackmail any easier?" Nelson inquires. "I don't judge people. I help them. Perhaps you can see the value of that more than you once did," Nucky explains. "And what do you propose to help me with?" Nelson asks skeptically. "Where to begin? Supporting a wife, a mistress, a baby girl — all on a

Eamonn runs the other Rohan sisters off before they can have their dessert of trifle so he and "Peg" can speak alone. He lights up a cigarette and offers Margaret one, but she declines. "I'm not as American as you thought," she tells him. "Mom's in the earth, so there's news for you," Eamonn says. "Martin Hennessey wrote me," she replies. "Our cousin in America — you kept up with him at least," her brother notes with slight bitterness. "She’s in the Keel parish yard,” Margaret lets Eamonn know that she's aware of their mother's burial site. "Right beside Da. Not at each other's throats for once. She asked for you at the last. I told her you'd be comin' home. What else could I say? Were you weak, Peg, now that it doesn't matter?" her brother asks Margaret, who mutters something. Eamonn says he

As Arnold Rothstein told Luciano, "Never let the past get in the way of the future." So what if Gillian once slept with him so Jimmy could ambush him? That's no reason to turn down an opportunity for another sexual liaison with the woman who cured Lucky's STD-caused erectile dysfunction? I never realized Luciano works part time as a Beaux Arts dance girl.
Nelson enters his apartment calling for Lucy. He hears a voice quietly singing. It actually brings a rare sincere smile to the agent's face until he gets to his room and sees that the voice belongs to a woman he doesn't know and she's cradling his daughter. "Mr. Mueller," the woman says, still using the fake name he has on the apartment address. Which makes it even more ridiculous that Rose was able to obtain the address from Agent Sawicki last week. "Who are you?" he asks. "I'm Frieda Short from downstairs," Mrs. Short (Laurie Dawn) answers. "Where is my — wife?" Nelson has an easier time getting the last word out than you'd think he would. "She had to pick up some formula. I told her we had plenty of milk, but she's very particular," Mrs. Short replies. Van Alden inquires how long ago Lucy left and the neighbor tells him it was about 20 minutes ago. "But it's no bother. This little one is an angel," Mrs. Short declares before resuming her singing. When Nelson walks into the other part of the apartment, he hears a strange noise. He also smells something. He opens the phonograph and discovers it spinning with something on it. He turns it off and finds the title page to the script for A Dangerous Maid attached to a soiled diaper by a safety pin.
Eamonn gives Margaret a nod and shuts himself behind a door as she helps her sisters clear off the table, all except Juliet who still finds herself fascinated by Margaret's hat. Nuala inquires about Margaret's transportation and she tells her that she has a car outside that she hired for the day. "Her man pays for it," Beth says half-jokingly. Nuala gives her younger sister a look of disapproval. "Well, she's got one, don't ya?" Beth asks directly. Juliet, fiddling with the hat, spins a surprisingly accurate theory about the man Beth guesses Margaret has. "He's very mysterious and very powerful. He has means," Juliet describes him. "Oh, it's that one, is it?" Beth interjects. "He gets people to do his bidding or they pay a price. Don't they?" Juliet asks, looking squarely at a shocked Margaret. "Yes, with a snap of the finger," she replies quickly, deciding to play along as she takes her hat. "But he has a secret tragedy. His heart was broken and he'll never let anyone near it again," Juliet adds. Margaret turns around, clearly creeped out. "Where are you getting that from?" Margaret asks her youngest sister. "It's her stories," Nuala explains. "She's always got her nose in a book," Beth tells Margaret. Margaret offers to send her some books, if it's OK. Nuala says that Eamonn must approve. "Think of us now and then," Beth urges. Margaret tells them it's only three hours from Atlantic City. "Look at you Peg — after all these years," Nuala says as she hugs Margaret. Beth closes the door and Margaret descends the stairs to exit the apartment building when Juliet runs out. "I was only joking with you about the man. He must be very nice — really," her little sister makes sure Margaret knows. "Yes, he can be," Margaret responds. "And you're my sister," Juliet declares, trying to sort out who this stranger is to her. "I'm Margaret Katherine Sheila Rohan," she informs the girl born after her departure from Ireland. Juliet comes down the stairs and shakes Margaret's hand. "How do you do?" Eamonn appears at the top of the stairs. "Aylesh — to bed with you," he orders. "Do I have to?" the girl pleads. "I'm off to work. Do not keep your sisters up all night," her brother says. "Send me books. I like anything with a horse in it," the little girl whispers to Margaret before running upstairs.
In the category of unexpected scenes, this episode does offer one brief one: a sweet Van Alden scene. Nelson sits in a chair in the apartment, holding his baby girl, actually taking Nucky's sarcastic advice and flipping through his Bible for possible names. "Deborah. Hannah. Abigail." When he says Abigail, the baby makes a little sound of what might be approval and for the second time this episode — maybe the second time ever — we see Van Alden smile. This episode offers so much that is good but traps it between so much that is indifferent or feels undercooked that I just wanted to take it into an editing room and re-cut it after I watched it. This short little scene leads directly to Van Alden marching into the office the next morning. "Mrs. Randolph," Nelson says. "Miss," she corrects him. "May

Margaret stayed in New York overnight and has a car take her back to Brooklyn where she spots Juliet playing in the street. She gives Juliet a wrapped gift. It is the 1920 novel The Girl, a Horse and a Dog by Francis Lynde. Margaret asks if Juliet has read it, but the girl says no. She tells Juliet to tell her if she liked it once she finishes. "How?" Juliet asks. "You'll write me and I'll write you back," Margaret promises. "We'll have a secret correspondence," Juliet preens. The girl asks what their mother

Lillian fetches scattered toys up from the floor when Nucky asks if she's heard from Owen. She says she hasn't, but that Mrs. Schroeder called to say she's on her way back from New York, adding that she and Katy plan to take Teddy and Emily to the beach. An annoyed Nucky calls Eddie at the Ritz to see if he knows Owen's whereabouts. Kessler doesn't but Nucky tells Eddie that he's running late and needs him to come pick him up. There are more than the usual number of short scenes in this episode. Granted, they for the most part are necessary for establishment purposes (such as the quick scene with Nelson and his baby leading directly to the one where he decides not to become Nucky's spy), but others (Lucky and Gillian boink again) don't have a payoff though they could down the road.
We get the answer about Owen in the next scene as he sits in a dive of a tavern (can we call it a pub if it's in Atlantic City?) eyeing a man who just sat on a stool at the bar. Sleater, beer in hand, sidles up to the bar and quietly asks the man (Gary Troy), "Is it Del Grogan?" The man suspiciously returns the query with a distinct Irish brogue. "Do I know you?" Owen turns on his smiling charm. "It is Owen Sleater, Sean's cousin from Dunmore," Sleater replies. "That pimple on the ass on the Lord," Grogan says. Sleater laughs, trying to keep his charm offensive going, but it's clear it's for show. "Quite a town on a Saturday night," Owen proclaims. "Every other night of the week as well,"

In what appears to be Babette's, Nucky and Bader hang out with Dempsey and Doc Kearns. Nucky tells the boxer that after the song finishes, he can give the speech. "And don't forget to mention Radio Corporation of America," Kearns reminds him. "How could I forget, Doc? You wrote that in my speech," Dempsey says as he heads to the stage. Once he's on the platform, the heavyweight champ begins reading directly from the pages Kearns handed him. "Good afternoon, ladies and gents. For those of you who — " Dempsey pauses and looks closer at the paper and then continues with a puzzled shrug, "don't know me?" The audience predictably laughs. "I'm Jack Dempsey —

As that scene fades to black, you might suspect it would make for a fine ending to an episode, but we've got another one. A cab driver (Mark Havlis) brings Margaret's luggage into the house for her. Her mood still seems down. She calls for Katy and Lillian, but gets no response. However, Owen comes walking her way. All rested up and cleaned up from his revenge killing I suspect. Obviously, Sleater has been preoccupied, but with Margaret arriving at a train station and getting in a cab, don't you imagine the news of someone shooting Nucky would travel quickly and be the talk of the town? "Help you with that?" he offers. "No thank you," she replies, looking pouty. "Don't be daft, ma'am," Owen says as he picks up her luggage. She assents and he follows her. "Where are the children?" Margaret asks. "The girls took them down to the beach," he answers. "That's hardly Katy's job," she comments. "Boss gave 'em the afternoon,"


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Another great recap, Ed. Did you happen to catch the Ken Burns "Prohibition" documentary? As with "Baseball," Burns displays his usual New York blinders by spending hours on the topic, yet relegating the likes of the "Purple Gang" to about four sentences. The Purple Gang, a group of Jewish mobsters, was one of most vicious of the era and operated out of Detroit. But I digress...
I suspect that Esther Randolph is based on real-life U.S. Assistant Attorney General Mabel Walker Willebrandt. Willebrandt took her task of enforcing Volstead Act VERY seriously and was constantly frustrated by the lack of Federal support. That seemed echoed in Randolph's early comment expressing her incredulity that the Atlantic City contingent works out of the U.S. Post Office.
Also, I saw it as more than coincidental that name Van Alden chooses for his daughter is "Abigail." I did some checking and in the past, it was the traditional term for a waiting-woman or female servant. Van Alden finds the title page for "A Dangerous Maid" pinned to the dirty diaper on the phonograph. And there's also a quick shot of Margaret's maid pointedly picking up two dolls off the floor which is consistent with the theme of the episode's two "discarded" babies: Margaret's miscarriage (NOT her fault) and Van Alden's daughter.
Finally, I'm hoping (but doubt) that this week's tryst is the last we'll see of Margaret and Owen. I know it's not fair of me to compare the two shows, but this Margaret/Owen storyline in Empire seems a tad too derivative of Carmela and Furio from The Sopranos.
I suspect that Esther Randolph is based on real-life U.S. Assistant Attorney General Mabel Walker Willebrandt. Willebrandt took her task of enforcing Volstead Act VERY seriously and was constantly frustrated by the lack of Federal support. That seemed echoed in Randolph's early comment expressing her incredulity that the Atlantic City contingent works out of the U.S. Post Office.
Also, I saw it as more than coincidental that name Van Alden chooses for his daughter is "Abigail." I did some checking and in the past, it was the traditional term for a waiting-woman or female servant. Van Alden finds the title page for "A Dangerous Maid" pinned to the dirty diaper on the phonograph. And there's also a quick shot of Margaret's maid pointedly picking up two dolls off the floor which is consistent with the theme of the episode's two "discarded" babies: Margaret's miscarriage (NOT her fault) and Van Alden's daughter.
Finally, I'm hoping (but doubt) that this week's tryst is the last we'll see of Margaret and Owen. I know it's not fair of me to compare the two shows, but this Margaret/Owen storyline in Empire seems a tad too derivative of Carmela and Furio from The Sopranos.
How'd you get all the cool stills? Are they just screenshots? I'm kind of a luddite with this stuff - I played the reporter badgering Demsey in the first scene ("What about his secret punch?" - wasn't I great?) I'd love to get a shot of my moment in the show. Do you have one? I'd happily send you twelve dollars American cash, plus a copy of my new comedy CD!
Great blog!
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Great blog!
best,
Dave Konig
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